http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm A story I'm working on - would love some feedback Wed, 3 Feb 2010 10:54:45 GMT http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm Hi,   I'm not sure if I should be posting this here, but I have this christian lesbian story I'm working on about a christian lesbian who discovers who she is in high school and what life has been like for her since this discovery. I'd Wed, 3 Feb 2010 10:54:45 GMT http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm#122 http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm You know everyone has thier own writing style or at least the best known authors are known for being individualy characteristic in thier works. They write in a specific manner that is of thier own. For instance Max Lucado, not a classic writer but if yo Wed, 3 Feb 2010 10:54:45 GMT http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm#162 http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm Thanks for the encouragement AverageGuy4u. I've been MIA when it comes to my writing and online participation here at RainbowChristians as well as on GCN and other online communities I'm a member of. I also have several blogs I've been MIA with. This ye Wed, 3 Feb 2010 10:54:45 GMT http://www.rainbowchristians.com/groups/orca/topic/A-story-I-m-working-on-would-love-some-feedback.htm#218